In my narrative paper I need to review the format requirements for the paper as well as develop the thesis statement which was too vague. I need to put more details in the thesis so that the audience knows more about what the paper is about. Once I have developed the thesis, then I need to work on the topic sentences for each paragraph. In the topic sentence on the second to last paragraph I didn't reflect the main idea in the thesis. With a stronger topic sentence the reader will be able to understand the idea of the paragraph. In my future papers I will develop the thesis paragraph to make the paper better. The only other problem with my paper would be a few grammar errors which can be easily fixed with reading the paper more before finalizing the final draft. Before writing another paper I need to look over grammar rules like punctuations.
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